Monday, October 6, 2008

Nietzsche's Misprints and other half-assed poems

 2 The Sperm: I kid you not...this is actually good. My house is a condom: used and fit to burst With half-baked, fragile, forces of life, Seeking completion and fulfillment Of goals and hopes, desires, ambitions of odd Success. Hopefully these walls aren't strong as thought.

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At October 10, 2008 at 8:47 AM , Blogger Duck said...

As is almost usual...I have hid here in the comments section a deplorable poem. It is not a poem. It is a pathetic rape of a dog's nipple. Imagine a person who would actually kill a dog by drugging it and then having sex by inserting or frankly just stabbing it in a nipple with his dick. It would undoubtedly be a painful death entirely undeserved by the animal. This is the sort of chap who would be found writing such poetry. I am not such a chap...i'm just a bad poet.
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Phony Shit-Pot:

Ideally I wouldn't even comment on such a ridiculously attrocious poem but times have changed and I believe that some tirade against its existence is in order. This may not be the worst thing ever written; since I achieved that feat some time ago, but it's definitely in the top five. That being said...I must admit that if I had an ounce of shame or integrity or a sobering drug (oxymoronic), I would remove it instantly and never let it see the digital light of the web's binary dawn ever again. That was a horrible sentence. I wrote it. You read (past tense, sounds like: red) it. My case is resting not dead.


Thus ancient ties were then forgot.
A strip of dirt divided thus we fought
Now sadness seems again to be our fill.
But I locate no reason for such things
The lot of Lot; it has become our lot:
We gather what we can and turn back not.
We travelled far and wide to find some peace
In distant mouths of caves, on tiny trees:
A home inside a home: a house of bees.
We lost all sense of self: Thank you and Please!
As madness second nature, harsh, becomes,
Peculiar cruel thoughts then come to mind
Conspiracy theories swirl around in turn
We will light the sky and watch it burn

 
At December 12, 2008 at 5:11 AM , Blogger danial tanvir jafri said...

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At June 29, 2022 at 9:18 AM , Blogger danial tanvir jafri said...

hey there.
you have to delete this post.

 

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